Message in a bottle
What comes back is never lost
How much do you love me?
John asked his Elouise,
Is it that hard? Cannot you see?
I threw a bottle in the ocean today
When you find it, you will know
Exactly what I have wanted to say and what you need to know.
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How am I supposed to find a bottle in the waves?
If you love someone, let them go is what the fables say
If they are yours, they will return
If they're not, well, I don’t have to say
The bottle will come back to you, I promise that to you
Maybe not tomorrow or even the next day.
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For days on end, John went to the beach
Looking for the bottle, he hoped to find
Every day, he returned with disappointment on his mind
The winter came, and Elouise took ill
The bottle slipped into the past
Life doesn’t care who it takes: Elouise won’t be the last.
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As years went by, John found love again
Although he found it hard
He still looked around when at the beach
But no bottle could be found
Until one day, when with his new love
A bottle washed up on the sand.
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He bent down and picked it up
Popped the cork and removed the note within
“I loved you then, I still love you now… Elouise”
Is all that it said.
He closed his eyes and thought of her
And pondered what should have been.
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I wonder who wrote such a lovely note
His new love said to him
This Elouise had such a deep love
For the person she had written this for
I wonder if they know it now
Or is it a secret that will be forevermore?
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He looked at her with tears in his eyes
I think they understand
She wrote it for her lover
And reached out and took her hand
Let’s keep the bottle and the note
I’m not going to leave it in the sand.
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Till next time
Calvin
Submitted for the "What Comes Back" challenge:
About the Creator
Calvin London
I write fiction, non-fiction and poetry about all things weird and wonderful, past and present. Life is full of different things to spark your imagination. All you have to do is embrace it - join me on my journey.
Comments (5)
beautiful take on the challenge. good luck, Calvin
This was incredibly lovely. 🩵🩵
Excellent words for the challenge
Call me silly but this made me cry . How beautiful it really is my eyes still full off tears. 💙💙💙
What a beautiful poem, it made me smile. Good luck with the challenge!