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Madame Misfortune

a lifetime of bad luck

By Luna JordanPublished about a year ago Updated 5 days ago 1 min read
Madame Misfortune
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Tears falling against the pillow,

her heart is full of sadness.

Everyone thinks she's perfect, but

no one knows what lies behind closed doors.

*

Skeletons in the closet,

all her innocence has died.

Like an unicorn in a fairytale,

love is always just out of reach.

*

"I don't need to be taught my ABC's";

every insult now sticks in her mind.

*

Cautious, she tries to hide her true self,

afraid to be vulnerable, afraid she'll lose him, too.

He attempts to undress her and she shyly declines;

she never hears from him again after.

*

A cruel joke is played;

burning down her pity party lessens the pain.

He returns and spends the night,

stealing the only precious thing she kept.

*

Unable to handle her distress,

she wants to put her demons to rest.

*

She starts stealing her friends men and

doesn't understand she's making it worse

instead of making it end.

*

Plastic surgery, make-up, new clothes;

she changes herself to keep unworthy men.

A variety come and go from her house, so

everyone calls her a slut.

*

She can't comprehend that lust doesn't equal love.

She can't call for help because no one cares;

"she's a whore".

*

One-night stands continues,

as does all the abuse,

and she finds herself having enough.

She cries for help;

"ridiculous", "we're not stupid",

"we know you were having fun".

*

Every light loses its glow,

and every star dies;

if somebody had helped her,

she’d probably still be alive.

AcrosticheartbreakMental Healthsad poetryFree Verse

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Luna Jordan

I create stories and poems, and am known for deleting them if I start finding them cringey.

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  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    This is one acrostic that has many lessons for one to learn both male and female. Good job.

  • It's really sad when someone mistakes lust for love. Your Acrostic had so much truth to it!

  • Alex H Mittelman about a year ago

    Amazing! The nights glow going away at the end was also very cool! Amazing work! Fantastic

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