Feeling 47
For Paul and John's 47-Words Short Story Unofficial Challenge
I walked into the kitchen and flipped on the lights. Then I just stood there, looking around.
I came in here for something. But what?
I opened the fridge, pantry and a couple of cupboards. Nothing jogged my memory so I flipped off the switch and left.
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A. J. Schoenfeld
I only write about the real world. But if you look close enough, you'll see there's magic hiding in plain sight everywhere.
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Comments (10)
Ha... well done! I've been like that all my long life & getting worse!!
hard relate! ✨💖
Good one!
Ha! And sometimes we never remember. Oh well, plenty more intentions where that one came from, lol.
Can I relate to this!😉😂
So relatable, AJ! In my case, I’d leave but then remember and come back. Can happen on a loop until I finally remember.
Nice to know we have the same experience, sis! Far too relatable, lass! Well done!
I find myself walking in circles, through the house, trying to remember what I was looking for. Great entry for the challenge
Hahahahahahahaha that was soooo freaking relatable! Loved it!
I love these vignettes, we really are a talented lot