The Cave Part 11
Darkness, and the countless points of light, as if the entire void beyond was filled with the fire of a million stars. I felt as if I was staring into the eternity of a night sky beyond those wooden doors, the place beyond the actual reality, while I stood behind a curtain of scenery, the mountain and sky a mere pretense. And in that void beyond of unfathomable space, there hung suspended a mighty shard of crystal floating in place, with hundreds of a far smaller chunks orbiting around it in balanced but intersecting circles, no two in the same path. These caught the light from the center, and sparkled with inner fire each.
Comments (17)
you ARE still here....glad to see you are still writing gold
you are indeed one of the best writers
Sky as freedom. Great idea for a haiku!
Whoaaaa, this was so magnificent! Loved your Haiku!
A simple yet deeply meaningful poem!
Beautiful Scott!! I love that this plays into that old wives tale that scooting stars are souls leaving earth! So smart!!
Beautifully and brilliantly penned!!!❤️❤️💕
Beautiful
This is beautiful, Scott. Well done.
Creative imagery, and a new word for me!
Very cool 😎 I love it
Wow this is amazing 💫 love how you described it, so beautiful.
What an eloquent piece of work. I could learn a lot from the writers on here.
Your eloquence never fails to impress me, Scott! Awesome!
You're baaaaack! Great entry 😁
Great final line
Gorgeous piece, Scott!! What a beautiful way to describe it :)