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haiku of now
Photo by Nicole Anne Pandacan on Unsplash
the sea pulls back its
foamy curtain—shells glisten—
surf veils them once more
About the Creator
Kristen Balyeat
Words fly to me on the wind, bump me as I'm strolling the city, splash me in the face while I rest by the river, and shake me awake in the middle of the night—I’m humbly one of the vessels they use to come to life.
Also, i love you:)
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Comments (19)
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ohhhh, this is beautiful. Well done! Congratulations!!
Congratulations, Kristen!
Stunning imagery, Kristen! 🤩 Congratulations!!!
Beautiful work, Kristen. Congratulations❣
A fitting haiku for the ocean & challenge… congratulations.
Lovely song of the sea. Congratulations on your win
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Ooh, love this. Congratulations!🍾
Love looking for sea shells, a lovely haiku. Congrats, Kristen!
I love your description of the sea as a curtain, and then referred to as a veil at the end. Lovely way to round out the image.
I KNEW this was a winner!! Congrats! 🎉
“Shells glisten!” Loving the imagery here. Beach is one of my favourite placed. Lucky I’m close by. 🌊 ☀️
Gorgeousness 🌊
Lovely
Great haiku Kristen 😁
This is stunning. 🩵
Ooh love this, lass
beautiful